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PostSubject: Poor graystripe/silverstream   Thu Jun 30, 2011 9:16 pm

sooooo sad

Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad

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PostSubject: Re: Poor graystripe/silverstream   Fri Jul 01, 2011 3:16 am

I hate that video! It makes me sad Sad

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PostSubject: Re: Poor graystripe/silverstream   Fri Jul 01, 2011 7:38 am

Its good...but didnt like how it ended...

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PostSubject: Re: Poor graystripe/silverstream   Fri Jul 01, 2011 2:51 pm

really, i thought that was the most heartbreaking part
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PostSubject: Re: Poor graystripe/silverstream   Fri Jul 01, 2011 3:52 pm

I thought it was good but....it didnt sound to friendly...its hard to explain.

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PostSubject: Re: Poor graystripe/silverstream   Fri Jul 01, 2011 4:02 pm

Alright, my critiquing cap is on.

1. Where are Tigerclaw and Cinderpelt?
2. It wasn't raining when she died
3. Graystripe isn't a tabby
4. Firestar has no white on him
5. This happened at Sunning Rocks right? So where is the river?


>.< sorry, not trying to be mean, but it's just the small things that bug me. But this video IS really good

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PostSubject: Re: Poor graystripe/silverstream   Fri Jul 01, 2011 4:04 pm

haha, good eye, never would have noticed those things.

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PostSubject: Re: Poor graystripe/silverstream   Fri Jul 01, 2011 4:15 pm

Thanks Fireheart Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Poor graystripe/silverstream   Fri Jul 01, 2011 4:16 pm

haha, your welcome! Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Poor graystripe/silverstream   Mon Jul 11, 2011 11:03 am

Mosspelt wrote:
I hate that video! It makes me sad Sad

Then don't watch it...
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PostSubject: Re: Poor graystripe/silverstream   Mon Jul 11, 2011 1:24 pm

I can't help myself! Razz I loved this scene in the books, and I like to see how other people portray it, and it always makes me sad. Curse my curiosity.

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PostSubject: Re: Poor graystripe/silverstream   Mon Jul 11, 2011 11:12 pm

Yea the video was good! Mosspelt is right. I caught those mistakes myself. Dont get discouraged its an awsome video
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PostSubject: Re: Poor graystripe/silverstream   Tue Jul 12, 2011 1:44 am

Yeah, I still like it myself. Smile

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