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PostSubject: Poems!!!!!!!!!   Sat May 04, 2013 1:43 am

Okay guys! The title says it all!!!!! Just right your poems. I'll go first.

Sorrow

Wet tears run down
Heads clouded with sorrow
Minds spinning around
It is all the same tomorrow


Nothing is better
Everything come down like hail
Days go on forever
And everything else is a fail

Darkness covers everything like a seal
Thunder clouds are overhead
It is all very real
Everything else is dead


Eyes blinded with fear
Life has been slain
The end is near
There is no more gain

Dead flowers lost their shine
The moon is gazing above
Rusted hearts lost their divine
The raven has replaced the dove ~Littlestep

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PostSubject: Re: Poems!!!!!!!!!   Sat May 04, 2013 8:05 pm

I'm not very poetic so I haven't written any poems, but that was very good!

This isn't written by me but it is one of my favorite poems.

Poison Tree

I was angry with my friend:
I told my wrath, my wrath did end.
I was angry with my foe:
I told it not, my wrath did grow.

And I watered it in fears
Night and morning with my tears,
And I sunned it with smiles
And with soft deceitful wiles.

And it grew both day and night,
Till it bore an apple bright,
And my foe beheld it shine,
And he knew that it was mine -

And into my garden stole
When the night had veiled the pole;
In the morning, glad, I see
My foe outstretched beneath the tree.
-William Blake

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PostSubject: Re: Poems!!!!!!!!!   Sun May 05, 2013 11:52 pm

Dark. That is the word to describe those poems.

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PostSubject: Re: Poems!!!!!!!!!   Mon May 06, 2013 3:39 am

I love your poem Littlestep! Very detail-like.

And Storm, I know that poem, talk about in my English class all the time, its very interesting.

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PostSubject: Re: Poems!!!!!!!!!   Wed May 08, 2013 12:01 am

Yeah, random, bad, stupid poem I came up with on the spot. MEANT FOR PURE COMEDY!

Cause and Effect (Because I fail with titles)

When cows fly
And ice cream floats,
The birds start to cry
And the children build moats,
The sky starts to break up
And a chicken doesn't shut up,
The people of earth go insane
And no one is safer than a stain on a shirt.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems!!!!!!!!!   Wed May 08, 2013 12:54 am

Littlestep: Wow, that's an amazing poem. I like the emotion and the rhyme scheme you have.
Storm: That poem is really good.

The only poem I've ever written was for English this class (I hated that unit >.>) So uh yeah:
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I think I’ll go write about something golden and warm.
It definitely won’t fit the norm,
But you can laugh all you want and think ‘Dude,
You’re talking about food’.
I’ll know that you’re wrong; to me it’s much more
They’ve provided me comfort since the ripe age of four.

The first is a snack,
Salty, smiling, you bite and they crack.
My mom always said that when I would cry,
Goldfish would help my eyes dry.
As if in my four-year-old brain I had heard them say
‘Don’t cry, everything is okay’.

But goldfish are salty they make your throat dry,
“That’s why I drink apple juice” I say in reply.
It’s sweet and delicious, the best kind is Motts.
If I had the money I would buy lots and lots.
Apple juice is nice, it’s cold and refreshing
Now I sound like Dr. Seuss, it’s not impressing.

Goldfish and apple juice, they’re golden and warm.
Come talk to me in three years, they’re all I’ll have in my dorm.

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PostSubject: Re: Poems!!!!!!!!!   Wed May 08, 2013 1:26 am

Rubywing: All I got to say, whaaa
Moss: hahahaha, oh my God. I think I love your teacher for putting snack foods as a prompt. xD

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PostSubject: Re: Poems!!!!!!!!!   Thu May 09, 2013 1:19 am

Littlestep: Good poem. I like it.
Stormheart: Haha, nice one. The last line made me laugh. I dont know why, but it did.
Ruby: HAHAHA! I was imagining everything. Flying cows. XD
Moss: Nice!
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