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Blossomtail
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 | | Subject: My Dream World (Poem) Thu Mar 17, 2011 5:36 am | |
| It's a bit random but oh wellz!
My dream world is totally magic,
It can be fun and also tragic,
I look around and I all I see,
A big world surrounding me!
I jump to each lily pad,
Coming up with more and more ideas,
I say,
"No time for tears!"
My head is overflowing,
Everything is glowing,
Every idea pops out,
"Yay!" I shout!
My dream world is the best,
No time for rest!
But I close my eyes...
And fall asleep.
I did write this last year for school and it got published (everyones did), and cos I wrote last year that's why it's a bit random. |
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Fireheart
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| | Subject: Re: My Dream World (Poem) Fri Mar 18, 2011 12:01 pm | |
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Blossomtail
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| | Subject: Re: My Dream World (Poem) Fri Mar 18, 2011 11:47 pm | |
| Thanks!  |
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Leafsplash
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| | Subject: Re: My Dream World (Poem) Sat Mar 19, 2011 3:10 am | |
| Cool poem! I see all the figurative language and poetic devices you used. ;D |
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Blossomtail
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Clan: RiverClan
| | Subject: Re: My Dream World (Poem) Sat Mar 19, 2011 3:27 am | |
| Haha, thanks!  |
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Fireheart
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| | Subject: Re: My Dream World (Poem) Sun Mar 20, 2011 5:59 am | |
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Rosepetal
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| | Subject: Re: My Dream World (Poem) Sun Mar 20, 2011 7:37 am | |
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Stormheart
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| | Subject: Re: My Dream World (Poem) Fri Sep 02, 2011 1:29 pm | |
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IceClaw the Scratcher
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Goldenfur
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| | Subject: Re: My Dream World (Poem) Fri Sep 02, 2011 7:35 pm | |
| It's a great poem! |
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IceClaw the Scratcher
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Flameleaf of FireClan
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| | Subject: Re: My Dream World (Poem) Mon Sep 05, 2011 9:37 pm | |
| The poem is really good! Did u get Best Poem Award or something? (If there is one) I love it! XD <3 |
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IceClaw the Scratcher
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| | Subject: Re: My Dream World (Poem) Mon Sep 05, 2011 10:50 pm | |
| Yeap! I'll definitely vote Blossomtail ____________________________ |
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Stonestep
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as much as you breathe 
, Love 
as long as you live 
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I have never been good with poems... -.-` 
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