Chapter 3

Chapter 3
The kits took the water their father gave them.
"Mom!" Silverkit yelled
"Did your father have water?" Crystalmoon asked
"Yes he wanted us to give you some" Waterkit replied
the four kits gave Crystalmoon the cold water.
"Thank you" Crystalmoon said as she bent down to lick the moss.
The all of sudden, Mystickit yelled
"Dad's on the Silver Stone!!!" She yelled
And Yewstar called out to the clan from Silver Stone
"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey, join beneath Silver Stone for a Clan meeting!" Yewstar yowled
Cats came out of the dens, from under the shade and went beneath the Silver Stone.
"Today, two kits are ready to start their training, Sunkit, Shadowkit come here. Hazelflower, id like you to mentor our new apprentice, Sunpaw. and Moonpelt, Shadowpaw has an honer to be your apprentice. I hope you both teach them well." Yewstar jumped of the Silver Stone as the clan cheered for the new apprentices.

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Days went by in the scorching sun. After sometime, it got cloudy.
"Mom look its going to rain!" Waterkit jumped with excitement.
"Your right!" Crystalmoon looked at the sky as a rain drop hit her nose. "Get inside the nursery right now!"
The four kits ran inside the nursery with their mom behind them. Icekit was drenched in water from the rain. Icekit coughed.
"Are you ok?" Silverkit asked
"Yes im o-" Icekit coughed again
"We'd better have Mousefang take a look at you" Crystalmoon said
Crystalmoon and Icekit went to Mousefang's den.

Thats Chapter 3 wait for chapter four, Still got writers block XD

Not bad for this chapter! Though I realized your chapters are very short! ^^ chill~ I'm fine with that!! XD

Hmm maybe you can try making your chapters a bit longer. Anyway great job!

They are short cuz i still have writers block and its hard to thin of chapters with writers block

Haha I know what you mean. I have writer's block too.

Your stories really good even if it the chapters are short Can't wait for Chapter 4

yeah overall, great job!

Yup great job and will Icekit be ok? I hope so but you don't need to tell me or i'll be a spoiler. >< Overall, Great job and awesome story! ^^

Flameleaf of FireClan wrote:

Yup great job and will Icekit be ok? I hope so but you don't need to tell me or i'll be a spoiler. >< Overall, Great job and awesome story! ^^

MWAHAHAHAHA i wouldnt tell you anyway i dont want to ruin it

Can't wait for Chapter 4! I wanna see what happens next in the story!

Yea me too. Hope that Chapter 4 will come out soon!

Goldenfur wrote:

Yea me too. Hope that Chapter 4 will come out soon!

Uh about that...*starts to creep away* I dont think it will be out for a while...*runs away*

Aww why?

Goldenfur wrote:

Aww why?

WRITERS BLOCK

Haha lol :3 I have a bit of writers block too!!! XD

I hate writers block >.< I was writing a story once and I kept getting writers blocks and my brother kept annoying me to write some more ! Well, Ruby, I'll just wait for it to come out

I'm having writer's block too. I can't think of any ideas! >_< Well good luck with your Chapter Rubywing!

Same here good luck Rubywing!